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Invincible 69 cover by RyanOttley Invincible 69 cover by RyanOttley
I drawd it.

:iconfco: FCO Plasencia colored it(saved it really!THX FCO!)
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Hi there, I usually tryin not to mess with advices, because usually artists see they flaws by themselfs and there is no point to double they thoughts. And because of my bad english too of cause :)

But if you're asking for a critique I have something to say. Firstly you are very talented artist and I totally love Invincible comic book. As an artist I understand why do you made such frozen action cover, but as for this one I think that you didnt make all that you can and all this scene looks somehow unfinished. I think that this is happen mostly because you didnt 'fix' they poses. What I mean is that poses all the characters on this cover have are uncertain and pretty boring and do not tells us much of they feelings such as pain, sadness, anger whatsoever.

So if I was in your place i would strengthen emotional impact of this cover by maybe a little more grotesque but stronger poses and facial expressions to put message that it have more clearly.

And of cause great lines and color, color artist do great job here!
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Hey, Ryan!

Maybe it's because I'm old enough to remember 15 cent comics, but I'm digging a classic cover scenario such as this: the title character facing a predicament having to act as a shield instead of taking on the luscious (yet powerful) "alien bunny", while his equally luscious partner-in-crimefighting is facing her own crisis as her once-incredible abilities have taken a turn for the worse. Throw some "Kirby Krackle" and a shield, and this would have been a standard Avengers cover from 1969!

Keep in mind, this is NOT a dig! I'm stating that dynamic cover layouts NEVER go out of style! And the wild "3-D" coloring effect makes this an even cooler cover. Great job!
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whitesmoke321 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2010
you are an awesome comic artist, I love the way you style power..
mnky Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009
Beta-Ray Barda!
I really like it, nowadays it's very rare to see a Kirbyesque, New Gods-inspired character design that doesn't look lazy or completely ripped-off. Did you design her? Congratulations, then.
RyanOttley Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2009  Professional Artist
Cory Walker designed her. I think it's a great design too.
mnky Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2009
Still, very nice take. Have you seen Marvel Boy's new costume? [link]
It's just screaming for you to draw him.
gangsterart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2009
ah these women
the-sketchman Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
noo spoiler alert xD

amazing work im a big fan of invincible!

definitly fav
urban-barbarian Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2009
Something about warrior babes! Gotta love'm!
SURFACEART Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009  Professional Artist
her look kinda reminds me of Hela or Enchantress from Marvel's "Thor".
Nice work Ryan :)
ReZourceman Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
This is what happens when the best penciller in the industry and the best colourist in the industry have an orgy.
RyanOttley Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009  Professional Artist
Thanks! But I don't know if 2 people is considered an orgy. In that case I've actually been to orgies. Just not with colorists.
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